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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 		<title>Nonviolence Licenses Collection V7</title>
 		<subtitle>DocBookv5 XML license text for license builder input.</subtitle>
 	</info>
-	<para>THE WORK (AS DEFINED BELOW) IS PROVIDED UNDER THE TERMS OF THIS COOPERATIVE NON-VIOLENT PUBLIC LICENSE ("LICENSE"). THE WORK IS PROTECTED BY COPYRIGHT AND ALL OTHER APPLICABLE LAWS. ANY USE OF THE WORK OTHER THAN AS AUTHORIZED UNDER THIS LICENSE OR COPYRIGHT LAW IS PROHIBITED. BY EXERCISING ANY RIGHTS TO THE WORK PROVIDED IN THIS LICENSE, YOU AGREE TO BE BOUND BY THE TERMS OF THIS LICENSE.TO THE EXTENT THIS LICENSE MAY BE CONSIDERED TO BE A CONTRACT, THE LICENSOR GRANTS YOU THE RIGHTS CONTAINED HERE IN AS CONSIDERATION FOR ACCEPTING THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS OF THIS LICENSE AND FOR AGREEING TO BE BOUND BY THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS OF THIS LICENSE.</para>
+	<para>THE WORK (AS DEFINED BELOW) IS PROVIDED UNDER THE TERMS OF THIS COOPERATIVE NON-VIOLENT PUBLIC LICENSE ("LICENSE"). THE WORK IS PROTECTED BY COPYRIGHT AND ALL OTHER APPLICABLE LAWS. ANY USE OF THE WORK OTHER THAN AS AUTHORIZED UNDER THIS LICENSE OR COPYRIGHT LAW IS PROHIBITED. BY EXERCISING ANY RIGHTS TO THE WORK PROVIDED IN THIS LICENSE, YOU AGREE TO BE BOUND BY THE TERMS OF THIS LICENSE. TO THE EXTENT THIS LICENSE MAY BE CONSIDERED TO BE A CONTRACT, THE LICENSOR GRANTS YOU THE RIGHTS CONTAINED HERE IN AS CONSIDERATION FOR ACCEPTING THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS OF THIS LICENSE AND FOR AGREEING TO BE BOUND BY THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS OF THIS LICENSE.</para>
 	<section xml:id="definitions">
 		<title>Definitions</title>
 		<para>An Act of War is any action of one country against any group either with an intention to provoke a conflict or an action that occurs during a declared war or during armed conflict between military forces of any origin. This includes but is not limited to enforcing sanctions or sieges, supplying armed forces, or profiting from the manufacture of tools or weaponry used in military conflict.</para>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 		<para>Source Code is Any digital Work which, through use of a third-party piece of Software or through the direct usage of itself on a computer system, the memory of the computer is modified dynamically or semi-dynamically. "Software", secondly, processes or interprets information.</para>
 		<para>Surveilling is the use of the Work to either overtly or covertly observe and record persons and or their activities.</para>
 		<para>A Network Service is the use of a piece of Software to interpret or modify information that is subsequently and directly served to users over the Internet.</para>
-		<para>To Discriminate is the use of a piece of Software to interpret or modify information that is subsequently and directly served to users over the Internet.</para>
+		<para>To Discriminate is use of a work to differentiate between humans in a such a way which prioritizes some above others on the basis of percieved membership within certain groups.</para>
 		<para>Hate Speech is Communication or any form of expression which is solely for the purpose of expressing hatred for some group or advocating a form of Discrimination between humans.</para>
 		<para>Coercion is leveraging of the threat of force or use of force to intimidate a person in order to gain compliance, or to offer large incentives which aim to entice a person to act against their will.</para>
 	</section>